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How Do You Write Emotional Scenes?
Many beginning writers ask the same question, how do I write emotional scenes without sounding fake, dramatic or boring?
The simple answer is that, emotional scenes work when you pay attention to what the character is feeling, why he or she is feeling it and how that emotion is manifesting itself in his or her body, thoughts and actions.
In story writing, particularly in novel, it is not big words and sad events that are the primary source of strong emotion. They can work best only when expressed through character reactions. In other words, emotion on the page is not so much important as it is about the exact experience of the character. If you want to write emotional scenes that feel real to the reader, build up the emotion from the character’s point of view, use small details and give the reader a chance to feel the emotion instead of just being told about it.
What does it mean by that?
An emotional scene is a scene in which the reader feels strongly about what the character is going through. That feeling may be grief, joy, fear, shame, anger, hope, love or relief.
But it’s not only about saying, “She was sad” or “He felt angry.” When it comes to emotional writing, telling your reader about your emotion doesn’t help them feel it. A good emotional scene builds off the emotion of the character and this works best when the situation supports it.
For example, Two characters may lose their friend. One may cry openly. Another may go silent and clean the kitchen as they are trying not to breakdown. Both reactions can feel real.
That is why emotional scenes in a novel depend so much on the writing of characters. The emotion has to be from who the character is. If you are a beginner to learn how to write emotional scenes, keep this simple rule in mind, emotion is real and powerful when it has a concrete and specific reason.
How to Write Emotional Scenes
If you are looking for the best way to write emotional scenes, here is the step-by-step process.
Know what exactly the character feels
Do express your character emotions by general words such as sad, happy or upset.
Ask, What does the exact feeling mean? Is it grief, guilt, jealousy, relief, fear, embarrassment or mixed emotions? With your writing, make the specific emotion stronger.
For example, “sad” is vague. By way of example, “She felt guilty as she had ignored her father’s last phone call” is much more powerful.
Know why the emotion matters
The right emotion works if the reader knows why this moment is important to the character. Ask,
- What does the character want in this?
- What have they lost, feared, hidden or hoped for?
- Why does this moment strike them so forcefully?
A scene is emotional when it touches something important about the character’s inside.
Filter the scene through the character’s point of view
Just describing emotion directly will not work, rather, describe the character as living through it. This means you show,
- What they notice
- What they think
- What they do not want to think about
- What memories or fears come to mind
If a character is nervous, you might see his hands shaking or a sharp tone of voice. A heartbroken character may look at the empty chair at the table. Point of view makes emotion seem personal.
Use body language and physical responses
Real emotion often shows in the body before the character expresses it. Try details like,
- tight throat
- shaky hands
- heavy chest
- dry mouth
- stiff shoulders
- sudden stillness
- fast breathing
Focus on fewl details adding too many will dilute the impact and feel less contented.
Let actions carry emotion
A characters must express their emotion through their actions. A character may,
- fold a letter again and again
- laugh at the wrong moment
- refuse to look at someone
- leave the room
- speak too quickly
- say nothing at all
Small actions like these seem more real than dramatic dialogues.
Keep dialogue Natural and Loaded
In emotion scenes, people don’t always say or do what they feel.
- At times they change the subject.
- Sometimes they speak in short lines.
- At these times when they say a sentence, it carries all weight.
Example: “I’m fine” can mean a number of things depending on context.
Simple dialogue can hit hard when the emotion behind it is clear.
Avoid explaining too much
One of the biggest beginner problems is to over-explain the feeling. You do not need to write, “She was extremely heartbroken and devastated and feeling like her world is ending.”
Many times, one vivid image or response is better, like this “She picked up her mug from the sink and set it down like it had burned her.”
Trust the scene and trust the reader, it will work.
Slow down important emotional moments
When a scene is important, do not rush past it. Give the moment space, let the reader experience the character’s reaction for a few lines. Focus on the important details that are most relevant. This does not mean making the scene long. The scene has to translate to readers, so make it certain and present.
Connect emotion to change
- The strongest emotional scenes typically involve the changing of something. After the scene, ask,
- What has the character realised?
- What is the change of relationship?
- What decision will now be different?
Emotion should not pause the story, instead it must move your story forward.
This are the important aspect in how to write emotional scenes in a novel. The scene must be important on an emotional as well as a structural level.
Examples/Mini Tips
Here are a couple of examples to help you see why there is such a difference.
Example 1: Telling vs Showing
Weak version:
Maya was very sad when her brother left her. She cried a lot and broke her heart.
Stronger version:
Maya was at the gate and was watching the bus go further and further. His joke was still in her mind, but now it was wrong. She reached into her pocket, pulled out the candy wrapper and folded it once, twice, until it cracked.
Why this works: Because it provides to the reader something to feel and picture.
Use one object in the scene to bring emotion, a wrapper, ring, photo, coat, even a message.
Example 2: Quiet emotion
Some beginners have the idea that emotional scenes must be loud. That’s not true, a hushed scene can be even more powerful.
After the argument, he walked into the kitchen and looked at his lunch, which was packed for a while and couldn’t move.
This works because the emotion is concealed in a small detail. Look for contrast. A simple action when there is emotional pain can strike harder than dramatic reactions.
Common Mistakes Made By Beginners
Here are a few mistakes that should be avoided,
- Beginners usually write like this "She was very sad" instead of showing their emotion through actions, thoughts or details.
- Explaining too much, like describing each and every feeling in detail, makes the scene lag, write like your reader's experience them.
- Beginners forget to filter the character's emotions through the character's point of view.
- Assuming emotional scenes must have a loud or dramatic sound but subtle actions like silence, small gestures are more powerful.
Characters have the power to elevate a story, especially when it comes to emotional moments! Explore what makes a character relatable and learn how to craft unforgettable characters. With this create stories that deeply connect with readers and leave a lasting impression. If you want a brief overview of how to write your first book, read How to Start Writing a Book.
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Final Thoughts
Learning how to write Emotional scenes needs practice, but it’s easier than you think if you just focus on making it true to the scene instead of making it big.
Focus on the character, why they feel the way that they do and the little details that show emotion naturally.
In novel writing, emotional scenes are powerful because it helps the reader connect with your characters. Keep it simple, be specific and let the emotions of the character take hold of the moment. And that’s where the real emotional writing starts.
