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Do you think you are telling too much in your story? It is referred to as info dumping, and it is the most common mistake which beginning authors make when they write fiction. Learning how to avoid info dumping in stories, writers need to present information to the readers through a gradual and natural way, and only when readers truly require it.
You don’t need to tell readers about the background or the explanation in long paragraphs but rather through action, dialogue and character experience. This makes your story interesting, easier to read and more immersive. The trick is easy, present the information in the form of a story as it flows rather than presenting everything before it starts.
And most likely, this is why your story seemed to drag or heavy at the beginning. To give an example, beginning a story with a complete history of the world rather than the character in action is a typical type of info dumping. In short, provide the readers with as much as is necessary to keep them interested, but not all at once.
What does it mean?
Info dumping occurs when an author provides excessive information in a single instance. It normally appears as follows,
- Long paragraphs explaining the world.
- Background information prior to the main occurrence.
- Detailed descriptions that slow the story
The problem is, it interrupts the story when the reader is becoming interested. This can be very useful to beginners to know and avoid info dumping. You want your readers to know all. However, too much information at the wrong time can overload them.
Not everything that is explained is bad. The difference is the following,
- The reader is to be informed by the necessary context as the story follows.
- Info dumping loads them with information that they are not yet in need of.
Too much information also impacts the pace of the story, possibly making the story feel heavy or stuck. Consider it in the following sense,
- Readers do not have to know all the things immediately.
- They need to know only the minimum information to maintain their interest.
Good storytelling requires proper control of time and it must reveal the information to you through its gradual development and know more about Why Overusing Adverbs Weakens Your Writing Why Overusing Adverbs Weakens Your Writing.
How to Avoid Info Dumping in Stories Step-by-Step.
When you are asking yourself how to prevent info dumping, then here is a simple step-by-step process that you can follow.
1. Start with action, not explanation
Start your story with something happening. Rather than describing the world,
- Show an action of a character.
- Allow the reader to learn by context.
Example,
Let’s consider a sentence, “The kingdom had been at war for 100 years…” This is known as info dumping, as you’re saying it all at once, but it can be written to make it better, “The soldier are running through a battlefield.”
This pulls the reader on the spot instantly instead of making him wait. Why?
When you say “The kingdom had been at war for 100 years…“, it’s information and the reader waits for action. This can be revealed as the story progresses.
2. Only provide what the reader needs.
When you are revealing information to the reader ask yourself,
- Does the reader require this information at this point?
Otherwise, leave it to be said later in the latter part of the story. This can be considered as one of the most effective methods of preventing info dumping among beginners.
3. Divide information into bits.
Your information needs to be divided into multiple sections instead of explaining everything in one section. Instead,
- Spread details across scenes
- Reveal bits through actions and events
Because you present information to them like breadcrumb trails to guide your reader on it’s way and the reader will walk along the path of your story.
4. Share information using dialogue.
Details can be disclosed by characters in a natural manner. Instead of explaining,
- Let characters talk
- Show personality while sharing info
Avoid making the conversation appear like a lecture. When the characters comment on something just to narrate for the benefit of the reader, it should sound unnatural.
5. Show by actions and reactions.
Readers learn best through the witnessing of things. Instead of saying,
“He was scared of magic”
How about this, “He avoids using it or reacts nervously”
This is the essence of storytelling, show, don’t tell.
6. Trust your reader
You do not have to tell all to your readers. Readers like solving puzzles. When you have Incomplete information,
- Builds curiosity
- Keeps readers engaged
When you withhold certain information, the readers are always willing to continue reading to learn more.
7. Revise and trim down additional explanations.
In your editing, consider this,
- Prolonged explanatory paragraphs.
- Repeated information
- Unnecessary backstory
Ask yourself “Is it possible to show this instead?
Either trim or rewrite anything that slows your story down. Read your scene aloud to identify the point at which the story is becoming draggy.
Examples/Mini Tips
Let us now look at some simple examples of info dumping and ways to fix them.
Example 1: World building
Saying, “The city was 300 years old and its history was marked by trade, war and politics…” is called an info dump and can be written like, “One of the merchants disputes prices in the market place.” With this the reader knows that it is a bustling trade city and does not require a lengthy explanation.
In world building, show the motion of the world.
Example 2: Character Backstory
When it comes to character backstory, saying, “Meena had a difficult childhood. Her parents were strict.” This is info dumping again, better show as the story progresses, like, “Meena hesitates before speaking because her father used to speak to her in severe ways”
Let the past of a character be known through emotions, actions or dialogues.
Example 3: Magic System (or Rules)
Let’s consider an example like, “Magic in this world works by….” This is known as telling and now, show like, the limits are shown when a character attempts a spell and fails. Show through consequences.
In each of these, the story continues to flow and the reader learns in a natural way. A genres of fantasy and sci-fi require additional explanation because they need more detailed information. The explanation should be given through natural flow instead of presenting all information simultaneously.
Quick test
When you are able to take a paragraph off and the scene does not fall apart, chances are that it is info dumping.
Bonus tip: Delay information a bit. Don’t explain on the spot, wait until the reader needs to know.
Common Mistakes Made By Beginners
The following are some of the beginner mistakes,
- You should not elaborate on all the information in the first chapter since it has to be revealed as the story progresses.
- The story requires the details of the backstory and it should not disrupt the story flow.
- Characters who talk like teachers make their speech sound unnatural to readers.
- The reader will not forget important details hence you should not repeat details concerning the story.
- A touch of mystery is desirable. Usually confusion comes not from there being a lack of information but from there being a lack of clarity.
- If you try to explain everything, it confuses the reader and the story becomes stronger as the reader can discover the details at his/her own speed.
FAQ (People Also Ask)
Final thought
One of the greatest steps to being a better writer is learning how not to info dump in your stories. Keep it simple,
- Start with action
- Share information slowly
- Show instead of explain
Note, you do not want to tell everything, but you want to keep the readers interested. When you pay attention to little, natural details, your story will be more alive and interesting. Allow your story to breathe and your readers will be eager to continue reading.
These are some common mistakes the beginners make and know more on other Beginner Writing Mistakes to Avoid to avoid in your first book of fiction and turn your ideas into a story know How to Start Writing a Book
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